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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 5:44 am
 


All things crooked.
Roads, mishapen cobblestone
Windows, angular frames
Doorways slant.
Rooftops a mosaic
Even the rain chooses its own course.
Trees bend to and fro
Sidewalks conform to hills
Logic defied.
Edinburgh charm.


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 6:32 am
 


I've never been to Edinburgh but from what I've heard about it I think I would probably like it a lot.

Nice poem, dimoreien. :) PDT_Armataz_01_37


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 6:35 am
 


Thanks Streaker :D

Edinburgh is a fantastic city :D


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:16 am
 


Great poem... the thing I noticed is the writing style seems almost contorted itself, which fits nicely with the impression you're trying to convey.

Unfortunately, I can't say I've been there to relate... someday.


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PostPosted: Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:36 am
 


Would you like to see the picture that inspired the poem?? It's a picture I took of Ramsey Gardens off the Royal Mile. I wrote this poem the same day.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v142/ ... n/Misc.jpg


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