[danikyvor]

All things crooked.
Roads, mishapen cobblestone
Windows, angular frames
Doorways slant.
Rooftops a mosaic
Even the rain chooses its own course.
Trees bend to and fro
Sidewalks conform to hills
Logic defied.
Edinburgh charm.

[Streaker]

I've never been to Edinburgh but from what I've heard about it I think I would probably like it a lot.

Nice poem, dimoreien.

[danikyvor]

Thanks Streaker

Edinburgh is a fantastic city

[Blue_Nose]

Great poem... the thing I noticed is the writing style seems almost contorted itself, which fits nicely with the impression you're trying to convey.

Unfortunately, I can't say I've been there to relate... someday.

[danikyvor]

Would you like to see the picture that inspired the poem?? It's a picture I took of Ramsey Gardens off the Royal Mile. I wrote this poem the same day.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v142/ ... n/Misc.jpg