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PostPosted: Fri Mar 04, 2005 11:39 pm
 


They say that luv is like a river
that drowns the tender read
they say that luv is like a razor
that leaves your soul to bleed

I think luv it is a flower
it blooms amidst the night
when light comes it grows a power
and ex eternal might

But it is dark and lonley,
theres only light unseen




I cant figure out the rest, how about some help?( its a poem, im acting nerdy)


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 05, 2005 12:09 am
 


I had do write a similar poem in highschool. That's why i am becoming an engineer!

you got a bit of a problem with lonely, don't you? try reversing lonely and dark and you could have a bit better time finding a rhyme


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 05, 2005 12:53 am
 


exalent idea!!!! dam ive been working on this thing for so long


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